Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,

due to

fragile road

condition

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inside

of

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suburb

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area

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, the

government

should invest and develop wisely on

roads

rather than prioritizing

on

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railways; for better public transportation in

downtown

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area, for that

reason

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I eagerly disagree with

this

context. Importantly, most of the

worker

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workers

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travel from

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the suburb

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suburb

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suburbs

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to the

city

via

local

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transportation system.

For example

, offices are mainly located inside of the central area of a

city

, so,

maximum

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amount of people come from downtown, not many people can afford to live in an apartment which is inside of a

city

or near

at

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their destination

work place

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.

Moreover

, travelling from

suburb

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to a

city

might be difficult because

of

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the

government

are

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less focused on investing in the

suburb

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roads

as

compare

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to railways in a

city

.

Furthermore

, fragile road

condition

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might resist tourism; tourists might get frustrated by travelling around the

country

due to

this

circumstance.

For instance

, an international tourist might

wanted

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to travel

every

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to every

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corner of the

country

but when that tourist suffers from bad road conditions that will be a negative perspective from him.

Consequently

, he might never return to

this

place or explain

good

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about the

country

after that experience and that will

effect

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affect

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on

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the

country

's

economical

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growth. In conclusion, it will be

wise

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investment for the

government

if

roads

are good enough to travel across the

country

and

also

profitable

due to

tourism and hospitality; for

better

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experience and for smooth public transportation the

government

should prioritize

on

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roads

rather than improving railways; for preferable tourism and more suitable transition.