Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many individuals think that it is necessary to spend a moderate amount of money on railways

instead

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of

roads

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. I strongly disagree with

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statement, because it is essential to have decent

roads

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inside of a

city

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,

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otherwise

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otherwise,

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public transportation will be in danger. In

this

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essay, I will argue about why I disagree

about

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with

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this

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announcement.

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with, many people come from

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the suburb

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suburb

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suburbs

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to work in

a

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an

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urban area. So they often have to face traffic

jam

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jams

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and uncomfortable

journey

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journeys

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with public transportation

due to

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not

well constructed

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well-constructed

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roads

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.

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, workers from a company named Saudia which is located inside of the

city

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and their employers

comes

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from the residential area which is situated outside of the

city

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, employers often attend lately

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traffic

jam

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jams

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caused by the unhealthy road

condition

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conditions

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.

Furthermore

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, many tourists visit many countries and provide their feedback to others and influence them to visit that particular

city

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or

a

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apply

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country.

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, it is important to have

a

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a well structured road

well structured roads

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well structured

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well-structured

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roads

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for everyone including tourists.

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, countries that rely solely on tourism,

they

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apply

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must have some wealthy road

condition

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conditions

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, because of bad road

condition

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conditions

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traveller might face lots of trouble to go

their

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to their

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desired destination.

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, travellers might

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find many negative aspects of those countries

whose

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that

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mainly depended on tourism could

crush

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into dust. In conclusion,

government

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the government

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give more priority to

roads

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rather than railways which will improve not only a healthy lifestyle but

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provide a vast amount of money from tourists and that will be

a

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apply

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beneficial to the country.