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The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The provided line graphs depict information on
amount
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 of money in Australian dollars which
was came
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 from
import
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imports
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 and
export
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exports
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 with three
various
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countries throughout 6 years, starting from 2004. From an
overall
 perspective, it can be clearly seen that,
nevertheless
 the export trade in Australia and Japan reached the highest value and led the pack,
the
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both statistics of China had overtook it with moderate alterations by the end of
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 time span.
Whereas
, the third country the US remained
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 at all. When it comes to
line
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 of
exports
 of Japan, before decreasing by almost 20 in 2009, it experienced
the
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considerable changes towards growth, reaching
the
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point 40 by 2008;
however
,
although
 the value of imports trend was almost equal to
exports
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with 20
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, there
wasn't
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 any shifts. Interestingly, the same tendency can be observed in the United
states
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figure of import. As regards to data
of
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 China, there was the most noticeable
increse
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increase
 in both categories with moderate growth from 20 to 30
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 and from 10 to about 40 in imports and
exports
, respectively,
while
 the least popular statistics among all countries belonged to the US
exports
 with 10 points.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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