Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport.However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of the bicycle among wider population?

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is
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are
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very environmentally
firendly
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friendly
transport
. Some
country
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is
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so popular because some
country
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is
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very good
bike
way for
bike
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bikes
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. In my
country
is not popular
bike
transportation. Public
transport
is not popular some people
belive
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this
if they
use
a
bike
or public
transport
there is not rich there is poor. I do not agree
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think
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because I do not prefer
own
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car
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my city is very small and
have
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a good way
for
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walk or
bike
. I usually prefer
walk
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to walk
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because I love my body and ıf I walk I feel
a
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healthy. Some
country
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countries
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is
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are
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very developed for
bike way
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bikeway
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for example
Amsterdam. The city is very famous is
bike
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bikes
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and there
is
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very stolen
bike
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bikes
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. If you are visiting Amsterdam you must
be
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rent a
bike
and you
parking
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a
bike
very
safetly
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safe
place. In my
county
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country
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very famous
car
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cars
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and there
have
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a lot of
car
parking
place
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but
this
is not good because
car
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have
a
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exhaust so
this
gas
very
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badly
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for
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the ecosistem
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ecosistem
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ecosystem
ecosystems
and human health. We do not understand ıf we
uncontrollable
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use
this
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our
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own
car
we do not live in worth because we are killed. The
goverment
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government
is working
this
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problem. People should be encouraged to
use
public
transport
and cycling. Studies should be done for
this
problem. The
goverment
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government
must
be improve
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public
transport
and cycling routes. Bicycle rental prices should decrease. Public
transport
should be cheaper and hours should be increased. Efforts should be made to reduce personal vehicle
use
.
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You have made clear comparisons between different countries with respect to bicycle usage.
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  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
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  • infrastructure
  • dedicated bike lanes
  • road safety
  • urban planning
  • cultural perceptions
  • weather conditions
  • topography
  • status symbol
  • awareness campaigns
  • government incentives
  • policy measures
  • transportation alternatives
  • commuting methods
  • environmentally friendly
  • health benefits
  • recreational activity
  • commute
  • urban transportation
  • public awareness
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