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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates data on how many
people
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 speak the top 6 native languages (Mandarin Chinese, Hindi, Spanish, Arabic, and
Portuguese
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).
Overall
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, individuals who speak Mandarin Chinese were in the top position,
whereas
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 the least
number
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 of
people
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 speak in the
Portuguese
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language
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 among those 6 languages. The total
number
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 of
speakers
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 of Mandarin Chinese is 1090
million
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, where 900
million
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 from native and 190
million
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speakers
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 of an additional
language
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.
Although
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 339
million
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people
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 speak English as a first
language
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, their
speakers
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 as a second or third
language
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 603
million
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, almost double their native
speakers
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, made them the 2nd highest
number
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 of
speakers
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 altogether. Hindi is in the 3rd position in terms of total speaking citizens (490
million
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), where 120
million
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people
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 do not speak as their primary
language
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, even though 370
million
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people
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 use it as a first
language
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 as a medium of communication. The Spanish native speaker is 350, which is 5 times higher than its 2nd or 3rd
language
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speakers
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.
On the other hand
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, the total
number
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 of
people
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 who speak Arabic and
Portuguese
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 are not significantly different 230
million
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 and 213 respectively. Among them majority of the
people
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 speak in their native languages both in Arabic and
Portuguese
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, portuguese, number, language, speakers, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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