the bar chart shows the amount of energy produced by wind in four countires from 1985 and 2000

the bar chart shows the amount of energy produced by wind in four countires from 1985 and 2000
The given graph illustrates how much
energy
was produced using wind in four countries (India,
Denmark
, Germany, and the US) over the years 1985 and 2000. Units are measured in
megawatts
.
Overall
, it is evident that the majority of
energy
generated by wind was in the US at the beginning of the given period,
however
, it was produced mostly in
Denmark
in the
last
year.
Moreover
, an increased trend was seen in all countries,
while
Denmark
experienced the most significant growth. In terms of the US and Germany, the amount of
energy
produced using wind was 1200
megawatts
in 1985, it
then
peaked at over 1600
megawatts
in 1990. A slight decline was seen in the amount of
energy
to reach approximately 1500
megawatts
in the
last
year.
Likewise
, 400
megawatts
were produced in Germany in 1985,
this
figure increased steadily to reach around 900
megawatts
in 2000.
On the other hand
, India and
Denmark
produced around 200
megawatts
in 1985.
This
figure rose sharply to reach 800
megawatts
and 1200
megawatts
respectively. In the final year, the amount of
energy
produced in
Denmark
exceeded that of the US to become the highest with more than 1600
megawatts
.
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