Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A) Introduce yourself B) Explain what the problem is C) Suggest solutions

#work #street #noise #complaint #council #b #c

Dear Sir/Madam I hope

this

letter finds you well .I am writing to

registered

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my complaint which I am facing from the construction which was taking place on the street near my house. My name is Navdeep and I live at 115

street In

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Street in

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Edmonton.In

morning

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the morning

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, I found construction activities

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taking place

due to

which I Could not able to Park my car

infront

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in front

of my house.

In addition

this

, as I know construction is going on,so many

mchinery

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machinery

machines

and equipment

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needed for

concreting

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works

such

Generator

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generators

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and

Pump

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consequently

these machines produce a lot of noise in the environment.

Hence

, my children

not

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able to study at home as their exams are due

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next month.

Furthermore

, I would suggest some solutions to overcome

this

issue. I would suggest you

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install

acoustic

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an acoustic

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panel around the Generator so less voice

listen

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listening

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. Looking forward to hearing a

postive

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positive

and prompt response from your side . with regards, Navdeep

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coherence cohesion

Try to structure your sentences more clearly. Rephrase sentences like 'I found construction activities is taking place due to which I Could not able to Park my car infront of my house.' for better clarity.

task achievement

Use a more formal tone, especially in phrases like 'so less voice listen.'

task achievement

You clearly introduced yourself and described the problem with details.

coherence cohesion

Polite greeting and closing, showing respect to the recipient.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

163 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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