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The table below gives information on households with a regular use of car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007

The table below gives information on households with a regular use of car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007
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The given line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of
cars
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 per household in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007. From an
overall
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 perspective, the data clearly highlights significant shifts in
car
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 ownership over the 36-year period. Specifically, the proportion of families owning two
cars
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 experienced a notable rise,
while
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households
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 without a
car
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 declined sharply. In 1971, nearly half of British
households
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 (approximately 47%) did not own a
car
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,
whereas
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 around 44% had one
car
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, and only 7% owned two
cars
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. It is noteworthy that no data were provided for
households
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 owning three or more
cars
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 during
this
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 period. One-
car
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 ownership became the most prevalent category from the 2000s onward.The most dramatic change was observed in the proportion of
households
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 without a
car
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, which plummeted significantly throughout the period, falling to just 25% by 2007.
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, the percentage of two-
car
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 families rose steadily, peaking at about 26% in 2007.
However
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, the slowest growth was recorded among
households
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 owning more than two
cars
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, which remained a small minority throughout the timeline.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car, households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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