The teaching of Information Technology is a standard part of the school curriculum in most secondary schools. The same is now happening in primary schools,where children as young as six are learning how to use computers. However, there is a danger that IT skills are being taught at the expense of more basic skills.
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In recent years, the study of IT has become a standard part of the
school
programme in most secondary schools, and now in primary schools too. However
, there is a growing concern that IT skills
are being taught at the expense of more basic skills
. I disagree with this
view and believe that learning IT will not affect progress in other important subjects.
To begin
with, school
programmes are carefully designed to provide pupils with enough time to study all subjects effectively. As a result
, children can learn IT while
taking up basic skills
such
as reading, writing and maths. A well-designed programme allows for a balanced education. In addition
, information technology is becoming increasingly important and is used in almost all areas, from the workplace to everyday life. Even the elementary use of a computer at home needs some skills
that many people lack today. Therefore
, computer science lessons are needed to give students the necessary basic knowledge, and as a separate subject
it requires special time for effective teaching.
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subject,
On the other hand
, information technology is a complex subject that requires a solid knowledge base. Introducing it too early, for example
in primary school
, may not be effective and may damage the learning of basic skills
. Young children still may not have the cognitive abilities required to pick up advanced IT skills
concepts, which can lead to imbalance
in their education.
In conclusion, a well-structured curriculum can provide enough time for both IT and essential subjects. In today's world, computer Add an article
an imbalance
skills
are important
as the ability to read and count. Rephrase
as important
Therefore
, the study should be supported and appropriate
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