Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. To what extend do you agree and disagree?

Some people

belive

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believe

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that a

mix

of

nationalites

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nationalities

nationality

and

culture

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cultures

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in a

country

could add more to economic growth and create a more attractive

culture

. In

this

essay

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essay,

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i

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I

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will

explaining

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explain

be explaining

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the points and say why

i

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I

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strongly agree or

disagre

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disagree

. Big Cities where the economy is more well developed are propensity to be more effervescent and popular.

Everyday

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Every day

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receiving

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receives

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a

mix

of nationalities and different cultures

and

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apply

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thus

, warming up

the

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apply

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tourism. I strongly agree that

this

junction of nationalities and

culture

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cultures

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add

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adds

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benefits, and a

country

becomes more entertaining and rich. Places like London, which is a

cosmopolit

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cosmopolitan

cosmopolite

country

,

and

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where

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the diversity of

nationalites

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nationalities

are the main aspect, are helped by the

imigration

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immigration

emigration

migration

that does the

labor

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labour

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work for

exemple

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example

while

the natives in the

majorety

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majority

prefer

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prefer to

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apply to

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for qualificated

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qualificated

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qualified

qualification

jobs. In

addiction

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addition

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, the

mix

of

culture

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cultures

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helps against

the

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apply

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racism,

thus

creating a place of greater understanding. On

other

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the other

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hand, the maxively

mix

of different nationalities could take

off

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apply

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the

country

its

onw

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own

now

culture

,

customs

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and customs

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and lose it

own

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its own

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indentity

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identity

. The

exemples

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examples

I could add

is

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are

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,

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apply

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my own

experience

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experiences

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. The place that I used to go

when

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to when

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i

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I

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was

teenager

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a teenager

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, is totally dominated by Argentine people, and we as natives have been presenting the

disapering

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disappearing

diapering

of the

culture

, habits and identity. I can not deny the changes and the economic

grown

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growth

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, but sometimes

its

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it's

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fews

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seems

like we do not

belonging

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belong

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to the place. In conclusion,

in

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apply

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overal

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overall

, I consider

the

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apply

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miscegenation potent and necessary to the

developement

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development

and diversity of the

country

,

although

, in

spide

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spite

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of to sum good things if it

is not control

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does not control

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could

couse sirious

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cause serious

harm.