The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The circles' graphs illustrate the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, There are four different major types of each circle.
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the food quality had a small result.
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