The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the
percentage
of Australian males
and females
who regularly participated in physical activity
in 2010. Overall
, the proportion of females
engaging in physical activity
showed a slight upward trend across age
groups, whereas
the participation
rate for males
fluctuated more significantly.
For females
, the highest participation
rate was observed in the 55-64 age
group
, where just over 50% were regularly active. This
was a noticeable peak compared to younger age
groups. However
, after the age
of 64, the percentage
of females
involved in physical activity
declined slightly, remaining just above 50%.
In contrast
, males
exhibited a different pattern. The highest level of participation
was seen in the 15-24 age
group
, where over 50% of males
engaged in regular physical activity
. Participation
dropped significantly for those in the 35-44 age
group
, which recorded the lowest percentage
of active males
. Interestingly, the percentage
of males
participating in physical activity
rose again in the 65 and over group
, reaching approximately 48%.Submitted by sastyoke on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, males, females, activity, age, participation, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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