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IELTS Task 1 The table chart below shows the number of nights spent by domestic and international tourists in Germany from 2016 to 2022 (in millions). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

IELTS Task 1 The table chart below shows the number of nights spent by domestic and international tourists in Germany from 2016 to 2022 (in millions). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
 table chart compares the number of nights spent by domestic and international
tourists
 in Germany from 2016 to 2022, using millions as units of measure. It is
possibile
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possible
 to divide the table chart
in
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 three different parts to improve the analysis. The first part goes from 2016 to 2019, the second one goes from 2020 to 2021 and the third one considers the year 2022. Seeing the first part of the table chart, it is
possibile
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possible
 to observe that the number of domestic and international
tourists
 has been growing steadily.
For example
, the number of nights spent by domestic
tourists
have
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 gone from 366.4 to 405.7.
On the other hand
, speaking about the situation from 2020 to 2021, you can see that there has been a steady decline
of
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 both types of
tourists
. 
However
, considering the year 2022, it is possible to see that there has been a strong sudden growth of domestic and international
tourists
.
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