Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today*s world and should be closed.What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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Nowadays, mass
is
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pondering on disadvantages caused by animal parks and a lot of believe these should be shut down because of the problems other living beings face
due to
it.
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creatures are actually losing their instinctive abilities
about
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which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs
futher
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further
followed by
another ways
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to animal parks if these get closed in
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forseeable
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foreseeable
future.
Firstly
, various living beings have their own way of living.
However
, when they are brought to zoos, they become dependable on humans for not only their food
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but for their safety as well.
Hence
, there are chances of them
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their inherited skills of attacking predator, ability to make their survival in terrain and tough weather conditions and getting food for their survival.
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, Lions and tigers are
animal
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who find their own nourishment
according to
their body needs and keep going around the jungle running, saving themselves from
predator
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predators
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. Obviously, it is not possible in animal parks for
animal
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animals
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to live as their life should be and
thus
they will definitely fail to keep innate things in them.
Secondly
, if by any chance zoological places
closes
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soon in future,
then
there
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alternatives to keep forest creatures in way better than
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way of keeping them. Having natural conservation areas, which may be
largers
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larger
large
, open but still restricted for any kind of hunting and logging of trees. Where wild beings can live by themselves without any interference
of
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humankind.
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, In India, there is
natural
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conservation park, where several endangered and other fauna are closely monitored
with out
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any
interfernce
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interference
interferences
and
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altering anything so that they can get
most
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out of
natural
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setting.
To conclude
, Zoos are having
negative
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effect on the upcoming generations of fauna
however
there
different
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startegy
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strategies
like conservatives that are proving more logical and beneficial for creatures.
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