In some countries students pay the collage and universities fees themselves, but in other it is paid by the government. Do the advantages of government money outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that schools are the place where children get knowledge from,

however

, it has been paid

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learner

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the learner

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in some nations,

while

in many countries

cost

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the cost

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of

study

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the study

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is covered by

government

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the government

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only.

This

essay will briefly analyse both the merits and demerits of

this

trend in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, the advantages when individuals give

there

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their

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fees

by

themselve

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themselves

.

The first

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and foremost

is

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they become financially independent as for paying

there

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their

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expenses and

fee

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fees

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, they have to work

part- time

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which aids them in understanding the value of money.

As a result

, they will never encourage

themselve

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themselves

to buy useless goods with their

hard earned

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money.

Moreover

, paying

there

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fees

individually

teach

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teaches

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them about how to

being

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a

self- dependent

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person.

For instance

, students living away from their parents have to

take

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make

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wise decisions

by

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on

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their own regarding what they have to do or what not even without

theirs

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parents

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parents'

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help.

Thus

, they become a self-sufficient person in future.

On the other hand

, people who

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that

government

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the government

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have to

paid

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their

fees

because

by

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doing

this

it

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provide

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everyone with

having

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equal access to education regardless of

students

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students'

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socioeconomic status. Since

,

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students are the future of the country who pay 15% tax to the

government

when they

started

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to earn by

themselve

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themselves

. So‌,

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government

is helping everyone so they can get benefits from them in the future.

To conclude

,

although

paying

fees

by

government

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the government

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helps to maintain social equality among everyone,

fees

paid by the

student

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students

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themselves

helps

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help

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them

in realizing

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the importance of money