The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent on 6 consumers
Change the noun form
consumer
goods
in Germany, Italy, France, Britain
. The initial impression is that British Correct word choice
and Britain
costumers
spent more Correct your spelling
customers
money
on consumer
goods
, while
German people
spent the least.
As can be seen, British people
spend just over 170 thousand
pounds
on photographic film which was the largest expenditure among consumer
goods
. They also
spent more than 162 thousand
pounds
on toys and CDs, while
France had the second place with just below 160 thousand
pounds
, on the other
hand
personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes were the least considerable Add the comma(s)
hand,
goods
at 150, 142 and 145 thousand
pounds
, respectively. that France people
spent money
on them.
It is clear that
,
spending Remove the comma
apply
money
on all consumer
goods
was very similar between Germany
Correct your spelling
German
people
at approximately 150 thousand
pounds
. In comparison to spending money
in Germany, spending money
on all consumer
goods
in Italy was different that
lowest point was related to personal stereos with 150 Correct determiner usage
the
thousand
pounds
and highest
point constituted Correct article usage
the highest
to
spending Change preposition
apply
money
on Toys with almost 160 thousand
pounds
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, goods, consumer, people, thousand, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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