The table illustrates the percentages of mobile phone owners using various phone features.

The table illustrates the percentages of mobile phone owners using various phone features.
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The table provides data on how many mobile
phones
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were used for different phone purposes in the years 2006, 2008 and 2010. The
overall
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message from data suggests that the majority of mobile
phones
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were used to make calls,
while
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the smallest share of mobile
phones
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was allocated to record video.
To begin
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with the most common uses of mobile
phones
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, all users were reported to utilise their device for making calls, taking photos and sending or receiving text messages stood at 100%, 66% and 73% in 2006, respectively.
Similarly
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,
while
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the use of
phones
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for taking photos and sending text messages increased steadily over a 4-year period, the percentage of people who used their
phones
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to make calls declined by 1%, reaching 99% in 2010. Other features,
such
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as playing games were relatively less popular though some showed significant growth. Standing at 17% and 12%
initially
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, playing games and playing music experienced growth to 73% and 26%
at the end
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. Meanwhile,
although
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searching the internet and recording videos were not used in the beginning, both of them rose to 41% and 9% in 2008, respectively.
Additionally
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, after the 2-year period, searching the internet climbed significantly to 73%, and recording video showed a moderate growth to 35%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words phones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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