The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The graph illustrates to rates of 4 types of
games
' sale numbers in the digital game
industry between 2000-2006.
Overall
, the table shows Handheld Games
rate always top of each year
. The rates are not under the 12 billion dollar all year
. Also
, Mobile Phone Games
didn't have any sales
in 2000-2001.
However
, the game
industry has just 2 types of games
in 2000, these are Console Games
and Handheld Games
. In addition
, sales
rates were under 12 billion dollars in 2000. The sales
find a top place in 2006, Althoug, Console Games
crease the lowest level of the chart in the same year
.
On the other hand
, we can notice to
the growth of the industry easily from 2001 to 2005. The numbers are increasing Change preposition
apply
year
by year
and the amount of money is rising in the game
's bazaar. In particular
, Mobile Games
rise from 2002 to 2006 with the same growth. Finally
, the game
sales
found almost 36 billion dollars in total.Submitted by turkogluahmetonur on
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