The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the diagram provided illustrates the process of manufacturing leather products like shoes or handbags from animal
skin
.
In general, producing leather products is environmentally unfriendly since their production not only consumes a huge amount of water but contributes to increased greenhouse gas emissions.
It is obvious that the primary material for Use synonyms
such
leather goods is animal Linking Words
skin
. Having dried it outdoors, animal Use synonyms
skin
is Use synonyms
then
transferred to the mill by trucks. There, animal Linking Words
skin
is washed with water and lime prior to soaking it in lime and preparing it to be flattened by rolling machines. Having flattened the animal Use synonyms
skin
, it is again soaked in tannin which is a combination of water and vegetable matter. Use synonyms
Finally
, the gained material is polished with the help of heavy rollers before transferring to the next factory by lorries to be converted into daily Linking Words
consumptional
goods like shoes, bags and balls used in sports Correct your spelling
consumption
such
as football or tennis.Linking Words
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