The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.
The picture illustrates the procedure of producing
milk
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and other dairy products.
Overall
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, the process comprised
of
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3 stages from extraction to consumption.
Firstly
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, cows graze and feed themselves with lawns, through which a chance is provided to extract
milk
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from them by
the
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means of
milking
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a milking
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machine. The extraction is done two
time
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times
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on
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a day.
After
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this
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, the
milks
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milk
kinds of milk
bowls of milk
pints of milk
glasses of milk
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are stored in
a
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refrigeration storage to lower their temperature. They are delivered to a dairy
factor
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factory
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through a
milk
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tanker, and refrigerated milks are delivered daily. In the factory, the
milks
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milk
kinds of milk
bowls of milk
pints of milk
glasses of milk
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will
be passing
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pass
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through a
pasterization
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pasteurization
process, before packaging and
selling
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sold
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in shops and supermarkets.
Also
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,
milk
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can be a benefit to
make
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making
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other products,
such
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as cheese, butter, cream, and
yogurt
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yoghurt
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • milking machines
  • containers
  • refrigerated trucks
  • pasteurization
  • homogenization
  • separation
  • standardization
  • cream
  • skim milk
  • fat content
  • packaging
  • cartons
  • bottles
  • dairy processing plant
  • quality control
  • safety and quality standards
  • distribution
  • retailers
  • grocery stores
  • vendors
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