A chart shows the total number of minutes peopel spent on telephone in UK decided in 3 categories
The
given
bar chart illustrates the number of minutes people spent on the telephone, divided into three types in the UK in the period from 1995 to 2002.
Verb problem
apply
Overall
, it is crystal clear that individuals mostly preferred
calls on the telephone rather than talking on mobiles.
On the one hand, we observe that local calls recorded with 70 Wrong verb form
prefer
billion
minutes in 1995 witnessed a steady increase of 18 billion
until reached their peak in 1999 at 90 billion
minutes before returning to the same number in 2002 at 73 billion
.
On the other hand
, both the national and international calls started from 35 billion
and faced a gradual rise by reaching 50 billion
in the last
years. However
, mobile calls were the least favoured ones in the initial years but reached 40 billion
in the end.Submitted by k7jassu on
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