The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world.
The bar charts show the information
of
average Change preposition
on
protein
and calories
intake from four different groups of people across the world: India, East Africa, Latin Change the noun form
calorie
America
and North America
.
Overall
, it is clearly observed that Indian peoples
eat alternative Fix the agreement mistake
people
proteins
than
animal Change preposition
to
protein
, whereas
that of people from North America
opt for animal protein
. However
, it is interesting to note that North Americans consume highest
Correct article usage
the highest
calories
among all other groups.
A closer look at the bar chart Correct quantifier usage
number of calories
can be seen
that North American people eat animal Verb problem
shows
proteins
the most as well as
other proteins
at 62 and 18, respectively. Followed by that of Latin America
at 32 and 13. While
both Indian
and East Africans share the same figures for consuming other Replace the word
Indians
proteins
at 15, Indian
consume fewer animal Replace the word
Indians
protein
Fix the agreement mistake
proteins
3
Change preposition
at 3
fewer
.
In regards to Correct word choice
apply
calories
intake, as expected, North Americans consume roughly 3,500 Kcal which is the highest of all four regions, Change the noun form
calorie
hence
, that
Correct determiner usage
apply
of
India Change preposition
apply
by
far the fewest at 2,000 Kcal. Add a missing verb
is by
Similarly
, the other two calories
intake Change the noun form
calorie
on
average at approximately 2,200 in East Africa and nearly 3,000 in Latin Add a missing verb
is on
America
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