The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelian students from 201 1 to 201 4. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
The given line graph includes information about the
number
of Venezuelan students who visited three different cities throughout the period of 3 years, starting Use synonyms
from
2011
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in
Overall
, it is clearly seen that becoming the most popular destination Linking Words
at the end
of the given period, London experienced a noticeable rise in the Linking Words
number
of students visiting there. Use synonyms
Likewise
, there was a more significant increase in Linking Words
visiting
Correct article usage
the visiting
pupils'
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pupils
number
to Paris compared to the ones in London. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
trend fluctuated in Rome between 2011 and 2014 years
Turning to the count of Venezuelan young sightseers in London, it increased moderately at the same rate, rising from 15000 to 17500. Linking Words
Then
, a more noticeable rise was considered in Linking Words
this
trend, reaching around 19000 in 2014. Linking Words
Similarly
, the Linking Words
number
of young tourists from Venezuela to Paris experienced a considerable rise from 2011 to 2013, climbing up from 10000 to 20000, but Use synonyms
this
chart moderately declined from 20000 to 17000 between 2013 and 2014
In regards to the count of Venezuelan students who visited Rome, it fluctuated between 18000 and 13000 from 2011 to 2014. Thereby, Linking Words
this
destination became the most unpopular among young sightseers Linking Words
at the end
of the given periodLinking Words
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