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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in five parts of the world in 2006.

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The graphs give data on the intake and cultivation of
potatoes
 in various continents of the world - South and Central
America
,
Africa
, North
America
,
Europe
, and
Asia
 - in 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that the bigger consumption of
potates
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potatoes
 was observed in
Europe
 and
Asia
,
whereas
this
 figure for lower indicators was in
Africa
.
Furthermore
, the most significant production of
potatoes
 was in
Europe
 and
Asia
 though
this
 figure for South and Central
America
, and
Africa
 was less. Looking in more detail,
Europe
 was
leader
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the leader
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 as opposed to other countries in terms of eating
potatoes
, with 96.1
kg
 per
person
.
Additionally
,
this
 pattern for North
America
 was 57.9
kg
 per
person
.
In contrast
, potato consumption was significantly lower in
Asia
,
South
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and South
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 and Central
America
, with 25.8 and 23.6
kg
 per
person
, respectively.
Likewise
,
Africa
 was the outsider at 14.1
kg
 per
person
. With regard to the planting
potatoes
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of potatoes
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,
this
 figure accounted for 131.2 and 126.3
million
tones
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tonnes
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, in
Asia
 and
Europe
, respectively.
In addition
, North
America
produce
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produced
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 24.7
million
tones
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tonnes
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 of
potatoes
 in 2007,
although
 16.4
million
tones
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tonnes
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 of
potatoes
was
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were
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 cultivated in
Africa
. In 2007, the least production was witnessed in South and Central
America
, with 15.6
million
tones
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tonnes
show examples
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, america, africa, europe, asia, kg, person, million, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural capacity
  • Dietary preferences
  • Cultural significance
  • Economic affordability
  • Trade policies
  • Food security
  • Production levels
  • Consumption patterns
  • Imbalance
  • Global agricultural trends
  • Technological advancements
  • Supply chain enhancements
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