The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided table illustrates the sum of minutes (in billions) of three diverse call types in the UK, namely local, national and international and mobiles, in 7 years from 1995 to 2002.
In general ,it can be clearly seen that,
while
the majority of UK citizens used local line
throughout the period, mobiles were the least popular. For National and international, Fix the agreement mistake
lines
and
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apply
calls number
increased; Fix the agreement mistake
call numbers
however
, the local figure stayed the same as it was in
the start.
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at
For example
, as the graph shows, in 1995 the total minutes utalized
by Correct your spelling
utilised
local
line were approximately 72%, after that it rose gradually hitting a peak in 1999 and Add an article
the local
then
declined steadily (90% and 72% respectively). In stark contrast, the amount
of telephone calls made by mobiles soared from more or less 12% to 45% ( 1999-2002), Change the quantifier
number
whereas
at the start of the period
it climbed marginally. Add a comma
period,
Similarly
, in 7 years the proportions of national and international call type
went up in small amounts, accounting for about 38% to 61%.Fix the agreement mistake
types
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