The chart below show a public Park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture illustrates a public
park
named Grange Park
in two periods. The diagram demonstrates the park
when it was built in 1920 and in the present.
Overall
, the entrances and one of the rose
gardens were unchanged. However
, the fountain, stage for musicians, glasshouse, pond for water
plants, a rose
garden
and four seats
were removed. Moreover
, two rose
gardens and four of the seats
’ locations were transformed. Also
, an Amphitheatre for concerts, a café, a water
feature, a children’s play area and an entrance
underground car park
were built.
The entrance
and a rose
garden
above, near Arnold Avenue were not modified. Additionally
, a rose
garden
and the pond for water
plants were replaced by a café and a children’s play area on the up-right side respectively. subsequently
, the rose
garden
was unmodified and two seats
were removed on the up-left border.
The stage for musicians and fountain was replaced by an Amphitheatre for concerts and rose
garden
and four seats
in the middle of the park
. The entrance
near Eldon Street on the downside was not revised. Moreover
, the glasshouse and the seats
were replaced by a water
feature and an entrance
underground car park
on the right-hand side. Also
, the seats
and rose
garden
were removed on the left-hand bottom.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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