The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The provided table gives data on the proportions of children educated in 4 different types of secondary
schools
in 2000, 2005 and 2009. It is measured in percentages.
In brief, it is evident that in 2000 and 2005, pupils were mostly attending voluntary-controlled schools
, whereas
in 2009 the situation was noticeably different, and the vast majority of them preferred getting educated in community
schools
.
When it comes to the year 2000, 52% of all children went to voluntary-controlled educational institutions. Additionally
, 24% of them attended grammar schools
, and 12% both community
and specialist schools
. No significant changes occurred 5 years later, but, as the statistic shows, 20% more pupils went to community
schools
in that year.
According to
2009, the largest proportion of pupils, namely 58%, attended community
schools
, which was 26% more, in comparison with 2005. Furthermore
, as the data demonstrates, only 20%, 12% and 10% of children chose to get an education in voluntary-controlled, grammar and specialist schools
, respectively, in 2009.Submitted by mihailkryukov55 on
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