The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The given line chart provides information on island, by 2017.
In total, The figure
who
many visitors Correct word choice
how
who
visited a Caribbean Correct pronoun usage
apply
islandy
by staying on a Peninsula and staying on cruise ships over a Correct your spelling
island
7 year
period.
Add a hyphen
7-year
Overall
from Perspective, It is a Linking Words
readity
Correct your spelling
reality
a
apparent that the highest number of tourists visited the place in total throughout the period.
In 2010, visitors who settled down on Correct article usage
apply
archipelago
Correct article usage
the archipelago
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
wittnessed
Correct your spelling
witnessed
upward
trend, starting from well over 0.5 Correct article usage
an upward
million
to reaching Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a apeak
apeak
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peak
at
2 Change preposition
of
million
people by 2017. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the number of travellers who Linking Words
stetteld
on cruise shipsCorrect your spelling
settled
,
was experienced Remove the comma
apply
adramatic
increase at about 2 Correct your spelling
a dramatic
dramatic
million
, which was a Use synonyms
half time
higher than the Add a hyphen
half-time
visitors
onCorrect quantifier usage
number of visitors
Add an article
the
of
Change preposition
for
travellors
showed a Correct your spelling
travellers
significantly
Change the adverb
significant
Correct quantifier usage
number of rice
rice
, which Correct your spelling
rise
was
started from 1 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2010 leading to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
people, in 2017.Use synonyms
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