The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line chart provides information on how many visitors visited a Caribbean island by staying on a Peninsula and staying on cruise ships over a 7-year period.
Overall
from Perspective
, It is Correct determiner usage
this Perspective
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readily apparent that the highest number of tourists visited the place in total throughout the period.
In 2010, visitors who settled down on the archipelago witnessed an upward trend, starting from well over 0.5 Change the article
apply
million
to reaching peak
of 2 Add an article
a peak
the peak
million
people by 2017. On the other hand
, the number of travellers who settled on cruise ships was
experienced a dramatic increase Unnecessary verb
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at
about 2 Change preposition
to
million
, which was a half-time higher than the number of visitors on the island, by 2017.
In total, The figure for travellers showed a significant rise, which started from 1 million
in 2010 leading to 3.5 million
people, in 2017.Submitted by kingdom_myheart on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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