The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of making a
violin
by hand in four main stages: cutting and shaping, heating, assembling, and varnishing.
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Overall
, the process follows a structured and precise approach, starting with cutting wood into specific shapes and culminating in assembling and varnishing the finished Linking Words
violin
, complete with its components and additional parts.
In the first Use synonyms
stage
, two thin pieces of wood are cut to form the front and back panels of the Use synonyms
violin
. The front panel is Use synonyms
then
carved with two f-shaped holes using cutting tools, and a bass bar is glued in the middle of Linking Words
this
panel.
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Next,
in the second Linking Words
stage
, the rib (a thin strip of wood that forms the sides of the Use synonyms
violin
) is heated and bent into the required shape using a heating tool.
In the third Use synonyms
stage
, the main body of the Use synonyms
violin
is assembled. The front and back panels are glued to the shaped rib to create the Use synonyms
violin
’s hollow body. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the scroll (the decorative top of the Linking Words
violin
’s neck) is attached, and additional components Use synonyms
such
as strings and the fingerboard are added.
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Finally
, in the Linking Words
last
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stage
, the assembled Use synonyms
violin
is varnished using a finishing material to enhance its appearance and provide a protective coating.Use synonyms
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