The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of making a
violin
by hand in four main stages: cutting and shaping, heating, assembling, and varnishing.
Overall
, the process follows a structured and precise approach, starting with cutting wood into specific shapes and culminating in assembling and varnishing the finished violin
, complete with its components and additional parts.
In the first stage
, two thin pieces of wood are cut to form the front and back panels of the violin
. The front panel is then
carved with two f-shaped holes using cutting tools, and a bass bar is glued in the middle of this
panel.
Next,
in the second stage
, the rib (a thin strip of wood that forms the sides of the violin
) is heated and bent into the required shape using a heating tool.
In the third stage
, the main body of the violin
is assembled. The front and back panels are glued to the shaped rib to create the violin
’s hollow body. Following
this
, the scroll (the decorative top of the violin
’s neck) is attached, and additional components such
as strings and the fingerboard are added.
Finally
, in the last
stage
, the assembled violin
is varnished using a finishing material to enhance its appearance and provide a protective coating.Submitted by mahyarnaseri on
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