The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates several steps of
sugar
making starting from the pre-production, production, to the post-production stage from
sugar
cane.
First,
in the pre-production stage, the
sugar
canes are planted for about 12 to 18 months until they are ready to be harvested. Later, they can be harvested by using a truck or simply cut by hand. After that, the raw
sugar
canes are put into a machine to be crushed to produce juice.
Next,
it is purified through a limestone filter and is evaporated in order to make it into
syrup
.
Subsequently
, the
syrup
will enter the evaporation process where it is heated with a high heat to let the water evaporate leaving only the pure
syrup
. After the evaporation process, it is put into a centrifuge to separate
sugar
crystals from
syrup
.
Lastly
, the
sugar
crystals are dried and cooled to form the end product,
sugar
.
To sum up
, in order to manufacture
sugar
, it takes several complex steps including growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, and separating which are done in both labour and capital-intensive ways.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, syrup with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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