The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked

cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares data about how many people who had different genders per millions of people smoking in the UK from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
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, it was important that the figure of populations who smoked cigarettes in both sexes reduced;
moreover
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, the main group that smoked a lot was men over the period of 10 years.
According to
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the diagram, at the start, Men, the main population who smoked more than females, hit just over 4;
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it reduced significantly to 2.5 in 2013;
however
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, its trend rose to 3 in 2015;
thereafter
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, it fell and in 2017, it reached the same point as in 2013;
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, it climbed to nearly 2.7 in 2019.Later it went down considerably to the minimum mark of roughly 1.3 in 2021. The graph demonstrates that women declined overwhelmingly from approximately 3.7 in 2011 to just under 1 in 2013 after that it fluctuated between 1 and 1.5 from 2014 to 2017;
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it leapt moderately to nearly 1.7 in 2018;
nevertheless
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, it decreased slightly to roughly 0.7 in 2021.
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