the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar canes

The illustration depicts the production process for producing

sugar

from

sugar

canes

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Overall

, it is clear from the diagram that manufacturing

of

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sugar

needs crushing

sugar

canes

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into

a

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juice

in

a

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seven main steps to be ready for

consumation

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consumption

consummation

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According to

what is shown, the process begins with

cultivation

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the cultivation

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of

sugar

canes

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,

wich

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is grown between 12 months and 18 months to be ready for

used

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. once matured, the

canes

is

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are

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harvestedby

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harvested by

harvested

cutting

it

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them

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either manually or by using a machine.

then

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, the harvest

transported

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is transported

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to the

manufactory

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manufacturer

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. At the factory, the

sugar

canes

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crushed

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to extract

juice

.

after

this

, the

extract

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juice

pass

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through

filter

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to eliminate any impurities.

Furthermore

, the elimination of water from the

juice

gives syrup. In the next step, the syrup

send

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to

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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, where the crystal

sugar

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is seperated

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seperated

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separated

from it.

then

, the

sugar

obtained

drying

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and

cooling

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,

wich

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is ready for

pachaging

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packaging

and

distribition

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distribution

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