The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%)
The visual data show us the main problems of citizens in the urban
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in Great Britain in 2008. On the charts could be seen 7 major cities, where huge 3 domains of living issues as air pollution, health services, educational and training.
By far, air pollution is the least reported issue, with the lowest band in Newcastle like 4-5% and the biggest range in Manchester, where Fix the agreement mistake
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The most remarkable part is the health services sector, which occurs for most cities more than 50 Linking Words
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noteworthy problem is the education and training part. Actually, even if it is lower than the health services sector, it could not be called tiny. Linking Words
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