The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%)
The visual data show us the main problems of citizens in the urban
area
in Great Britain in 2008. On the charts could be seen 7 major cities, where huge 3 domains of living issues as air pollution, health services, educational and training.
By far, air pollution is the least reported issue, with the lowest band in Newcastle like 4-5% and the biggest range in Manchester, where Fix the agreement mistake
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thing appeared 3 times more often than in Newcastle.
The most remarkable part is the health services sector, which occurs for most cities more than 50 percent
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it is still remarkable, but the range is lower than 50%
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noteworthy problem is the education and training part. Actually, even if it is lower than the health services sector, it could not be called tiny. For instance
, it started from the lowest point in Manchester somewhere like 45% and finished with portion
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