The diagram below show the process of producing smoked fish

The process illustrates data about smoked

fishes'

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fish's

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production.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the diagram has 13 steps,from fishing fish to deliver to the stores. The first three steps include information about fishing. If at the outset, fish are hunted with nets,

next

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two steps are distributed by boat to the port.

Then

, they are frozen in the containers and after

that

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they are thawed to the fresh water.

Moreover

,

after

this

stage,they cut from their heads and

then

washed in

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apply

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salt water

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with yellow colours.

Nonetheless

, after smoking under the fire,they are packaged and frozen in 0

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again in the cold stores. After all of them, smoked fish

are

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put in the

mini vans

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and transported to the ocean meat markets.