The diagram below shows the proccess of producing smoked fish.
The process Illustrates how smoked put into fresh water for thawing and cleaning.
Cleaned material dipped in the salt water and yellow colour, before entering the room was full of smoke. Smoking is the final stage of production, next steps are related to the packaging. The ninth step of the process is packaging the ready product and sending it to freeze. In the next stage, frozen ones navigate to the cold stores.
fish
is produced.
Overall
, there are thirteen steps to making smoked fish
and it begins with catching fish
and ending with delivery to fish
stores.
In the first step
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step,
fish
are caught from seas and rivers. Afterwards, they are transported to the port with the help of boats. Besides
, raw materials are sent to special places to freeze. Before cutting and cleaning the inside of the product, freezed
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freeze
fish
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is
Finally
, ready products are delivered to the fish
stores from the cold warehouse by special freezer cars.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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