The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graphs depict the entire percentage of movies by time released and ticket sales between four film categories in certain
country
in 1996 and 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Overall
, romance film production remained stable over ten years while
the other three climbed. On the other hand
, the interest level of watching comedy surpassing
other categories in both years.
In the left picture, drama comprised the majority of the show released in 1996, making up just over a quarter in total, and maintained Wrong verb form
surpassed
this
lead in 2006 for 35%. Comedy made up 20% in 1996, after a decade, the percentage rose by 5% to reach a quarter. Fantasy ranked third with 10% in 1996 and 16% in 2006, followed by romance (6%) with no significant rise or fall.
In the right illustration, despite the drama's sales ticket showing a slight increase from 15% (1996) to 16% (2006), it still held the second highest rank in ticket counts. In contrast
, the payment of romance tickets dropped from one in twenty to half of that and became the smallest share.Submitted by nineband9s on
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