The pie chart illustrates the pivotal ground that negatively affects the productivity of agricultural land while the table shows information about the proportion of land degradation due to those effects categorized in three separate areas of the world within the 1990s period.
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The pie chart provides the total proportion of long-term consequences of land degradation which were over-grazing, deforestation, over-cultivation, and others in the year
of
1990 in the three distinct types of areas in the world.
Looking from an Change preposition
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overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that agricultural productivity was the highest number in the data compared to others Linking Words
such
as deforestation which was the second pattern, and over-cultivation. Linking Words
On the other hand
, other causes were the lowest percentage.
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According to
the figure, the loss of fertility accounted for 35% of the graph which was the main result of soil erosion, Linking Words
likewise
, deforestation and over-cultivation Linking Words
which
both Correct pronoun usage
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were
showed similar trends in the chart just over one-quarter and exactly a third in the final year surveyed.
As for remaining, others Unnecessary verb
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was
at a mere 7% which was the smallest number contrasted with socio-economic impacts.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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