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The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of ways to
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 out the various news in Canada and
Australia
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 in five categories namely ;TV,radio , print ,online and not specified.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the majority of people who want access to
latest
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 news chose TV and online newspapers to access the news because of the convenience .
By contrast
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 ,radio and print have the lowest usage in both countries .
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, printed articles took up just a small fraction. As can be seen from the pie chart ,TV took up the largest percentage of users in Canada ,at 40 % compared to 37 % in
Australia
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 articles online
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 the most popular in
Australia
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 52% ,respectively .
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 ,
whereas
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 the printed newspaper in
Australia
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 showed only 7% and
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 figure accounted in Canada was
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 times higher .The percentage of not specified methods have the same usage ,meanly 2% in both countries .

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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