The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates data about the
number
of opening
and Fix the agreement mistake
openings
closures
of shops in one country over an eight-year period between 2011 to 2018.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that,
there Remove the comma
apply
were
a downtrend in both numbers. Another Change the verb form
was
Correct your spelling
interesting
intresting
fact is thatCorrect your spelling
interesting
,
in 2011 the Remove the comma
apply
number
of openings were
greater than Change the verb form
was
closures
, Correct article usage
the closures
while
in 2018 the
number
of closures
were
greater than openings.
Looking at the details, as regards the numbers for openings, the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
figure
started at over 8000 and halved in the first period to reach 4000. In the next two years
there were
an upward trend in the Change the verb form
was
figure
and reached about 6000, then
in 2016, the number
decreased to 4000 and remained the same for next
two Correct article usage
the next
years
. Next,
the figure
fall
by 1000 to reach 3000 in 2018.
Replace the word
fell
By contrast
, the number
for
Change preposition
of
closures
started at above 6000, there were some fluctuations in first
three Correct article usage
the first
years
. However
, the figure
plunged in 2015 and fall
to under 1000. Wrong verb form
fell
Following
this
, the number
jumped in 2016 to reach almost 5000 and remained the same in next
two Correct article usage
the next
years
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, closures, figure, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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