The graph below shows the number of years spent at school in the different regions of South East Asia between 1980 and 2009.

The graph below shows the number of years spent at school in the different regions of South East Asia between 1980 and 2009.
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The given line graph depicts how many
years
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students stayed at School in Five Countries (Malaysia, Indonesia ,Thailand and The Philippines) over an 11-year period.
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, from Perspective, It is readily apparent that All trends in five countries showed a dramatic increase in the number of
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stayed at school. looking at the details in the line, in 1980, Malaysian learners were the highest trend of
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among other regions, who remained at school, with around 10
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.
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number rose steadily to reach a peak of 14
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, in 2009. It is similar to the
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students,
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,
this
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figure had started to rise from 2
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, leading to about 10
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, which was 2 times lower than in Malaysia
at the end
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of 2009.
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, There was a deep growth in the year figures between Indonesia and Thailand learners, which were started in1980, with roughly 8 and 4 respectively. Both numbers climbed significantly, reaching the Same share as numbers, which stayed at 10
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by 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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