the line graph shows the changes in share price of Outokupu companies in euros between 2006 and 2020.
The chart provides information about
proportion
of international students Add an article
the proportion
graduated
in Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
Correct pronoun usage
who graduated
Overall
, we can see decline
rate from New Correct article usage
a decline
brunswich
to Ontario Change the capitalization
Brunswich
except
BC where in 2006 observed Add the preposition
except for
high
rate, Correct article usage
a high
also
Correct article usage
a trace
trace
Wrong verb form
traced
increase
Add an article
the increase
of
the Change preposition
in
amount
of students in all provinces by 2006.
Three states NB, BS, Change the quantifier
number
QB
were leaders with more than 5% in 2001 and Correct word choice
and QB
first
two among them almost doubled Correct article usage
the first
Correct article usage
the persentage
persentage
of inter.students in 2006. By 2006, only BC had increased Correct your spelling
percentage
number
of inter.graduates more than two times. Correct article usage
the number
Monitoba
and NFL and Ontario had equal rates. Alberta and Quebec had Correct your spelling
Manitoba
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
increase in percentage.Change the adverb
slight
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