The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one twon in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
The table shows the
percentage
of men
and women
working in four industries: retail/shops, health, manufacturing, and tourism, in 1990, 2000, and 2010. The percentages for men
and women
are different in each industry and change over time.
In retail/shops, the percentage
of men
stayed the same at 13% in all three years. For women
, the number was 7% in 1990 and slowly went up to 9% in 2010. In health, the percentage
of men
rose a little, from 7% in 1990 to 9% in 2010. Women
in health started at 9% in 1990 and increased more
to 15% by 2010.
In manufacturing, the Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
of men
dropped a lot, from 30% in 1990 to 15% in 2010. Women
in this
industry started low at 8% in 1990 and fell further
to 3% in 2010. In tourism, men
’s percentage
went down slightly from 13% in 1990 to 10% in 2000 and stayed the same in 2010. Women
in tourism started at 23% in 1990 and slowly increased to 27% in 2010.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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