The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph reveals information about the changes in the rates of three different metals' prices in the
year
2014.
Overall
, there were three types of materials
such
as copper, nickel, and zinc. The trends of each one fluctuated dramatically and in some cases, the rates declined and reached
to
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negative value as well. It is clear from the figure that the rate was 6% for
nickel
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at the very beginning of
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January which decreased gradually and the change reached
to
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a negative value of -3% within 6 months. Though it started to rise
up
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again, the percentage was still around 1% in December. For copper, the percentage started from 2% and never crossed it, rather the changing value ended up
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1.5%
at the end
of the
year
. In January 2014, the monthly change was only 1% for zinc which increased by 2 % in February.
Finally
, the pricing rate was around 2% for zinc by the end of the
year
2014.
Therefore
, the highest changing run was shown by Nickel throughout the
year
while
the other two displayed a closure play of the rate alteration.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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