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The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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Given are two graphs concerning spending
income
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 in a given European country.
While
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 the first graph compares spending
income
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 on diverse issues in low-
income
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families
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, the second graph illustrates
this
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 in high-
income
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families
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. In general, the amount of
income
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 has a significant role in a family’s life. high-
income
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families
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 tend to experience an enjoyable life,
whereas
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, low-
income
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families
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 seem to struggle with staple needs. It is evident from the information supplied that the highest proportion of the low-
income
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families
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’ funds is dedicated to nutrition and fuel at 29% and 24% respectively, meanwhile, a slight amount of
income
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 remains for enjoyment like recreational activities, clothing and attending in hotels and restaurants at 11%, 5% and 4% respectively.
Also
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, a moderate part of
income
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 at 18% is spent on miscellaneous In more affluent
families
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,
however
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, the highest proportion of the
income
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 is dedicated to joy
such
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 as miscellaneous and recreational activities at 23% and 21% respectively and slightly lower at 12% to restaurants and hotels. Yet, by far the fewest proportion of
income
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 is expended on fuel, food and drink at 6% and 15% which are the most expensive items to low-
income
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families
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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