The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the sequence for the manufacturing of construction
bricks
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. In general, it can be clearly seen that the given process is visibly time-consuming, different equipment is involved in it,
while
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most of the stages are equally necessary for the final product. In the initial step, a machine called a digger collects
clay
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from the ground. After that, the
clay
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is distributed on a metal grid in order for it to fall onto the roller. In the following stage, water and sand are added to the
clay
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, and
then
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the shape of a brick is made by either filling the
clay
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into a mould or cutting it with a wire. After that, the
bricks
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are dried inside an oven for about 24-48 hours. The next phase consists of three steps,
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, it is placed into a moderate klin with a temperature of 200°C -980°C.
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the
bricks
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are transported to a higher temperature klin and,
lastly
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, they are left in a cooling chamber to cool for 48-72 hours. The final stage is packaging and delivering the finished
bricks
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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