The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features and make comparisons wear relevant

The
pie
chart
depicts the main reasons which decrease the effectiveness of farmlands worldwide. The table describes how
three
continents
such
as North America, Europe and Oceania, were influenced by these incidents in the 1990s. The numbers show the percentage of
land
degraded. When considered together, the estimation in the
pie
chart
is backed up by the data provided by the table. The vast majority of
land
degradation is caused by
three
major problems, which are overgrazing being the highest at 35%, followed by
deforestation
at 30% and over-cultivation at 28%. It all correlates with the number of fields that lost value throughout the
three
regions. Combined, overgrazing,
deforestation
and over-cultivation corrupted 18.3%, 11.7%, and 11% of the
land
, respectively.
However
, there is a significant difference between the
land
deteriorated
due to
deforestation
and overgrazing in the
three
areas.
This
doesn’t align with the statistics provided by the
pie
chart
, where the gap between
deforestation
and overgrazing is only 5%.
However
,
this
may be
due to
the records on the
pie
chart
being global.
Overall
, the figures show
a
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strong support for each other,
although
there are differences in the reported figures
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