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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the life span of
Ladybug
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a Ladybug
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as well as
 depicts the parts of its body.
Overall
 Lady Bird's body includes eight segments and the life cycle of
this
insects
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insect
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 involves four main steps which
repeats
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repeat
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 over and over.
According to
 the anatomy of
Ladybug
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the Ladybug
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, the first part, on the top
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of its
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its
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it's
it is
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 head there are two attached
antanna
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antenna
, and it has two eyes with pronotum on the head. In the middle segment, on the
suface
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surface
 of its wings, there are red
elytras
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elytra
. It has more than four legs.
In
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At
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 the bottom, behind its wigs, there is Lady Bird's abdomen. Regarding its cycle process, it commences when eggs
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are layed
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layed
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laid
 by adult
Lady birds
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Ladybirds
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 on the leaf in two to five days which is followed by
larval
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the larval
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 stage. In
this
 step, the Ladybug grows
during
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for
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 21 days which turns out to be pupa on the leaf;
this
 takes a week. In the next stage, the adult insect emerges,when it is ready to lay eggs.
This
 process repeats again and again.
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