Part 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Part 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ' income in 2007,2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
illustrate
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the distribution of US
household
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households
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(in million)based on their yearly earnings in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the income groups range from less than$25,000 to $100,000 or more.Earnings from $75,000 to $99,999 experienced a smooth change (approximately 15), and it was the lowest figure in those 5 categories, which hasn't exceeded 15 in three years. Incomes between $50,000 and $74,999
has
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reminded
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relatively stable over the period in just over 20.
In contrast
, families income from less than $25,000 to $49,999 have a similar
variations
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, simultaneous growth to almost 30 in 2011 and decrease in 2015. One of the most striking
feature
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is that families earning $100,000 or more.
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it
has
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some decline in 2011, it
surge
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to 34 in 2015
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and accounted for the largest share. In summary, the data highlights a shift in income distribution in the United States, with a general increase in brackets between 2007 and 2015.
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