The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
The graph demonstrates three various counties of the Oregon state's increasing population
such
as Columbia
, Xamhill and Washington during 1940 and 2000.
Overall
, it is obvious that Washington was the dominant county with the highest number of citizens between those years, but on the other hand
, Columbia
showed a downward all the time with a slight rising
. Replace the word
rise
Furthermore
, Xamhill followed Columbia
with little differences.
To look at details, in 1940 Washington had 75 thousand
population which hit its highest point and over the years the citizens of this
town reached 240 thousand
.Moreover
, although
Columbia
started with only 20 thousand
it increased its pupils by 80 thousand
. In addition
, Yamhill followed similar patterns as Columbia
, for example
, the citizens of Xamhill were 30 thousand
in 1940, but it was risen by 90 thousand
in 2000.Submitted by znezerli209 on
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