The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture illustrates the production of
electricity
from geothermal energy in the geothermal plant.
Overall
, five steps are shown in the diagram which are the process of generating
electricity
in a geothermal plant. In the first process, the cold
water
was pumped down. In the final stage, the generator produces
electricity
. It is evident that in the start, the cold
water
was stored.
Subsequently
, the cold
water
was pumped down 4.5 km into the injection well. In the third step, the
water
was heated by the hot rocks in the Geothermal zone and was sent to the production well.
Moreover
, the hot
water
was pumped up to the condenser.It is clearly seen that in the fourth stage, steam was stored. In the final process, the turbine was powered by steam
then
the generator was powered by the turbine and produced
electricity
and the
electricity
was sent to the grid.
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